Thursday, January 14, 2010

waukened
snaw-shuils scartin
thrawin sidelins the hap




wakened
snow-shovels scraping
throwing aside the blanket

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  2. Oh! like that child-like energy in L3! :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. Thank heavens for your translation this time Jon, the challenge was simply beyond me! But I should have known it for I'm living with it daily.

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  4. The scraping alarm clock, hear it!
    _m

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  5. Neighbours always busy ;)
    Fine haiku John.

    It is funny how close Jutlantic and scottish language are - the word sidelins (aside) spoken in Jutlantic sidel├Žns :)

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  6. The scraping of the shovels! Morning music after the snow.

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  7. This nicely parallels! Well done.

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