Just a thought John, I think a 3rd line 'headed for sunset' might enhance/continue the bobbing image...??
this trickling image is beautiful...
sunset could be a good place to head for!enjoyed, wishes, devika
sated streamthis quackin' duck chasesa floatin' ballLike this John! __The red ball, in my mind's eye, easily seen as a >reflection< of the "reid sundoon." _m
I like it.
A vivid image John...
Ah ha, I see.It took me a while to get the compass of this!