green patch clamour of birdsblack cat
Oh yes, green is always there! :)platches is interesting, as it rhymes with splashes...and mean the same, in some way, wishes, devika
This is very nice John...
Staying green under the snow, the grass taunts. Nice one John. _m
I like this. what about changing the clamour as the last line. It can only get better
Lovely John.
Hi John, Happy New Year to you and your family! Thanks, as always, for commenting on kami haiku throughout the year.kami
I can feel it.
green patch
ReplyDeleteclamour of birds
black cat
Oh yes, green is always there! :)
ReplyDeleteplatches is interesting, as it rhymes with splashes...and mean the same, in some way,
wishes,
devika
This is very nice John...
ReplyDeleteStaying green under the snow, the grass taunts. Nice one John. _m
ReplyDeleteI like this. what about changing the clamour as the last line. It can only get better
ReplyDeleteLovely John.
ReplyDeleteHi John,
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year to you and your family! Thanks, as always, for commenting on kami haiku throughout the year.
kami
I can feel it.
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