Thursday, September 10, 2009

i the dentist's
wytin chaumer:
a gawpin reid rose




in the dentist's
waiting room:
a gaping red rose
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8 comments:

  1. Devika Jyothi3:23 AM

    hahaha!
    best place for a red rose to be, and gaping....enjoyed this one, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)2:24 PM

    I enjoyed the humour of this haiku/senryû!

    Best wishes,
    Angelika

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  3. Bill2:51 PM

    I'll think of this when I'm in the chair tomorrow.

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  4. Tikkis1:51 AM

    Reminded me ...
    where is my dentist's
    phone number?

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  5. Magyar9:18 AM

    Subliminally suggestive... my jaw opened some. Aaaaaaaaaa. Good smile here, John! _m

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  6. BlueJayEye1:12 PM

    Good one...:)

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  7. Gillena Cox2:23 PM

    nice one;
    i was struck by the redness of some ixoras, leaning overa fence; i saw while walking home from the supermarket a few day ago, and i thought m ixoras were red; WOW!!!

    much love
    gillena

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  8. Ralf Bröker12:27 AM

    Good one, John!

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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