Thursday, September 10, 2009

i the dentist's
wytin chaumer:
a gawpin reid rose




in the dentist's
waiting room:
a gaping red rose

8 comments:

  1. hahaha!
    best place for a red rose to be, and gaping....enjoyed this one, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. I enjoyed the humour of this haiku/senryĆ»!

    Best wishes,
    Angelika

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  3. I'll think of this when I'm in the chair tomorrow.

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  4. Reminded me ...
    where is my dentist's
    phone number?

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  5. Subliminally suggestive... my jaw opened some. Aaaaaaaaaa. Good smile here, John! _m

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  6. nice one;
    i was struck by the redness of some ixoras, leaning overa fence; i saw while walking home from the supermarket a few day ago, and i thought m ixoras were red; WOW!!!

    much love
    gillena

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  7. Good one, John!

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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