Great alliterion in the first and the last word; though presenting a multiple sound-analogy it is still of discreet character. Love that!Best wishesRalf
Reflective... lovit. _m
I thought: Oh, I love the sound! (And when I'd read Ralf's comment I did know why.)Best wishes,Angelika
just enough. good one.
As always an enjoyable set here, John :)the image of a heron dropping into the poet's mind was fascinating...so was cicadas in the silent forest...wishes, devika
love the motion in this - excellent!