I like this one very much...
yes, I really like it.
oooh - heavy and atmsopheric... I can smell the wet leaves from here
well deserved - bravo!
Beautiful John. A fine balance of image and sound.
this and also the previous two , simply magic jon!
Congrats again, John. Great haiku. Wish I could do that with my verse ...Best wishesRalf
I like this one very much...
ReplyDeleteyes, I really like it.
ReplyDeleteoooh - heavy and atmsopheric... I can smell the wet leaves from here
ReplyDeletewell deserved - bravo!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful John. A fine balance of image and sound.
ReplyDeletethis and also the previous two , simply magic jon!
ReplyDeleteCongrats again, John. Great haiku. Wish I could do that with my verse ...
ReplyDeleteBest wishes
Ralf