Wednesday, April 15, 2009

pink freith
o gean flourish -
speuggies dookin




pink froth
of cherry blossom -
sparrows bathing

12 comments:

  1. I didn't know what froth is. Now I do and smile. Great image. Here many cherry blossoms are white - and if birds shake themselves in pink puddles, the whole scene takes place under an almond tree. Very light and refreshing verse. I like it.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  2. Very unique way of seeing/saying, John

    it is a refreshing one, and I like it, :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. Beautifully phased haiku – nice one...

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  4. Beautiful haiku John.

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  5. is a speug a sparrow? Ive been wondering

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  6. yes speug is sparrow
    john

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  7. here in Trinidad, the pink poui trees are now in full bloom and the bunches o flowers look like pink froth

    much love
    gillena

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  8. I envy those sparrows!

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