argument, spikes..John, whats happening?hope its an imaginative mind at work! :)wishes, devika
the energy to argue over waste ground is not good, wasteful at the best, togethernes should be on the agenda.
I like unusual subjects in haiku... the third line works well
Perfect, John!
Nice approach - it could be people, animals, or just the thistles, and there is something romantic about the phrase 'waste ground'.
ouch, John!!! very skillfully put together; argument/thistle nice juxtaposition and the wasteland just completes and resonates so wellmuch lovegillena
a powerful image
One of those echoes of the human in the natural. Or is it the other way around?
argument, spikes..
ReplyDeleteJohn, whats happening?
hope its an imaginative mind at work! :)
wishes,
devika
the energy to argue over waste ground is not good, wasteful at the best, togethernes should be on the agenda.
ReplyDeleteI like unusual subjects in haiku... the third line works well
ReplyDeletePerfect, John!
ReplyDeleteNice approach - it could be people, animals, or just the thistles, and there is something romantic about the phrase 'waste ground'.
ReplyDeleteouch, John!!! very skillfully put together; argument/thistle nice juxtaposition and the wasteland just completes and resonates so well
ReplyDeletemuch love
gillena
a powerful image
ReplyDeleteOne of those echoes of the human in the natural. Or is it the other way around?
ReplyDelete