John, what a beautiful, though tragic poem. Beautifully worded.
She doesn't not answer with words. She suffers. She acts. Her spring is gone. Impressing.Best wishesRalf
Ough. Said the flower.
His scolding amplifies the sadness that is sensed by all of us; so well presented, John. _m
Good one, Johnbut did he scold her...i thought he was kind! :)wishes, devika
an entire story told in 3 lines...
Touched me personally, Mr. McDonald-a brave choice of subject.
Wow - you handle the big kicks of life so well. I love the way you said 'her dementia' thereby distancing her from the actions the illness causes her to do.