Friday, October 03, 2008

zen dug
laipin the dub
swallaein the tide




zen dog
lapping the puddle
swallowing the ocean

8 comments:

  1. John san,
    This is very nice haiku.
    It is easy to understand as well as to be able to feel the image.
    I like it.

    sakuo.

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  2. zen dog swallowing ocean...

    wow! just so :-)

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  3. a salty dog? this is great!

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  4. Sure! He (She?) is doing it!

    (We need to preserve the oceans!)

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