Monday, October 20, 2008

wundy day -
leaves
stertin tae dirl




windy day -
leaves
starting to rattle

6 comments:

  1. Mmmm great choice of the word 'rattle', its important to keep lively in describing things like leaves when theres so many around. You've got it right here!

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  2. "rattle" Good ear, John.

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  3. leaves rattling -- nice :-)

    wishes
    devika

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