Wednesday, October 08, 2008

bi the door
o the x-ray dept.:
derk hairst brainches




by the door
of the x-ray dept.:
dark autumnal branches

10 comments:

  1. and nothing to hide them anymore...

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  2. window views are always the space and time fillers


    much love
    gillena

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  3. I enjoy the scots. I'd love to chat with you off-line about it

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  4. a preview...
    this sight empty bones
    slower steps
    _m

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  5. i loved this!

    i always loved the bare autumnal branches leaning towards the skies...

    & this could be my first try..i don't yet know the rules of haiku, though...if readers here could guide me i'll obliged..:-)

    wrinkled bony arms
    yearning for the sky
    a promise of peace

    Wishes!
    devika

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  6. This is perfect John. I spent a fair bit of time in my youth being x-rayed and was never that keen on the department. This can help me to view it more favourably!

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  7. This is mine:

    a white paper rolling
    silently --
    an ecg film

    (They took an electrocardiogram from me, and they found something.)

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