Tuesday, October 07, 2008

quate mornin -
leaves juist
suddentlie lowsin




calm morning -
leaves just
suddenly letting go

12 comments:

  1. Autumn-
    the trees will not
    wait on the wind



    much love
    gillena

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  2. The silence of the 'float.'
    _m

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  3. hasn't happened yet here, but won't be long...
    nice!

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  4. Not long here either. :)

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  5. Nice autumn picture...

    why is autumn a favourite of poets?

    just a loud thought. Perhaps I know why...I too love it!

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  6. Me too - this sudden cold snap is enough to make anything let go!

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  7. Catching up on your recent work; this one is especially fine.

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  8. John, i love
    this haiku !


    proceeding autumn --
    making room
    for a winter wind

    (This term "winter wind": kogarashi in Japanese, see more from Issa.)

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