Friday, March 07, 2008

mairch wunds -
chirms, o peerie burds
blawn bogshaivelt




march winds -
chirps, of tiny birds
blown shapeless

4 Comments:

Blogger jem said...

Top. That 'blown shapeless' is excellent. I see my sparrows, the way they get thrown about like leaves.

3:41 AM

 
Blogger John McDonald said...

changed the arrangement jem (not the sense) to get rid of so much punctuation
john

5:06 AM

 
Blogger polona said...

wow, love it!

1:54 PM

 
Blogger Masago said...

Graphically described!

4:52 PM

 

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