Friday, March 07, 2008

mairch wunds -
chirms o peerie burds
blawn bogshaivelt




march winds -
chirps of tiny birds
blown shapeless

4 comments:

  1. Top. That 'blown shapeless' is excellent. I see my sparrows, the way they get thrown about like leaves.

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  2. changed the arrangement jem (not the sense) to get rid of so much punctuation
    john

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  3. Graphically described!

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