Monday, March 03, 2008

leain hame -
e'en his sheddae gaes
intae the flittin van




leaving home -
even his shadow goes
into the removal van

6 comments:

  1. ahah funny
    time to get off this computer and get the kettle on.

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  2. can't get away from the shadows, eh!
    love it

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  3. So just an emptiness left behind...
    Sad.

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  4. I like this one.

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  5. I love this. I've moved a fair few times in my life - I wish I had this haiku with me on those occasions.

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  6. "removal van" is a much more eloquent phrase than our American "moving van."

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