ha!perhaps i would prefer it this way:gazinginto the stream -narcissiit still implies everything without being too explicit
Or perhapsdaffodils gazinginto the stream . . .narcissussuggesting the moment when the connection is made.Your way is amusing, though. You just have a moment that gets us going!
ha!
ReplyDeleteperhaps i would prefer it this way:
gazing
into the stream -
narcissi
it still implies everything without being too explicit
Or perhaps
ReplyDeletedaffodils gazing
into the stream . . .
narcissus
suggesting the moment when the connection is made.
Your way is amusing, though. You just have a moment that gets us going!