Sunday, March 16, 2008

hingin sparks
tremmle i the tirl -
farawa kirk bells




hanging raindrops
tremble in the breeze -
distant church bells

6 comments:

  1. Perfect reading for a rainy sunday. I love the way you connect the two images.

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  2. a wonderful image... very similar here...

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  3. It's Sunday, and the church! But the rain is here, the church farther off... Feeling of silence? Yes, a Sunday-haiku!

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  4. An eloquent juxtapostion, poetic (not "poetical") in the best sense.

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