Monday, April 16, 2007

snaggit amang
the brummle's jags
a riven-up scrieve




snagged amongst
the bramble's thorns
a torn-up letter

4 comments:

  1. leaves on the river:
    willow, maple, birch...
    and a torn letter

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  2. This one leaves me with a lot of questions. I guess I'll have to write my own answers.

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  3. I agree with "magiceye". Poignant, indeed. A strong feeling of sadness, of violence.
    I like very much the alliteration thorns / torn-up and admire the technique and the prosody. It is a lesson for me.


    An excellent poem! Thank you for sharing, John.

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