Monday, April 09, 2007

dowie
as veesitors win awa -
daffins



sad
watching visitors leave -
daffodils

5 comments:

  1. I like very much the ambiguity of this poem. Each reader can find his version, his interpretation.
    Thank you for sharing, John.

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  2. good one. like dana-maria i like the ambiguity.

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