Saturday, April 14, 2007

hover-flee's sheddae
muves ower'r breist:
its lang trams lag




hover-fly's shadow
moves over her breast:
its long legs linger

7 comments:

  1. Yeah, very good.

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  2. A shadow which moves... suspense... a very suggestive description.

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  3. You are so talented !!!
    All poems are so beautiful ! :))

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