Monday, February 06, 2012

throuch brainches  -
the sin sneddin
sheddaes oot o the freest




through branches  -
the sun cutting
shadows out of the frost
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4 comments:

  1. Frank...6:09 AM

    Very nice, John. The last two lines are very vivid...

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  2. Gwil W8:47 AM

    sharp!

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  3. Dave Serjeant4:42 AM

    This is great, John. I've seen other poems by other poets about the interaction between sun and snow/frost etc, but you have a unique slant on it here.

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  4. jem4:25 AM

    Very tactile - I like the way the sun is sharp rather than the frost.

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