arthritic black fingers
Nice one, John. Just a suggestion but maybe 'frightening' may be better than 'frighten'...
Oh yes, I remember!
those pesky shadows / silhouettes. Love it!
elm branches the dragons stretch their necksfull moon shadows__I just had to leave this instant's echo, John... to your fine haiku. Always. _m
This is a translation from your Caribbean Kigo entry; I think this one fits here, too?-)Ensi treffit -makaamme kuunnellenäidin askelia http://juhanitikkanen.blogspot.com/2012/02/caribbean-kigo-31.html
arthritic black fingers
ReplyDeleteNice one, John. Just a suggestion but maybe 'frightening' may be better than 'frighten'...
ReplyDeleteOh yes, I remember!
ReplyDeletethose pesky shadows / silhouettes. Love it!
ReplyDeleteelm branches
ReplyDeletethe dragons stretch their necks
full moon shadows
__I just had to leave this instant's echo, John... to your fine haiku. Always. _m
This is a translation from your Caribbean Kigo entry; I think this one fits here, too?-)
ReplyDeleteEnsi treffit -
makaamme kuunnellen
äidin askelia
http://juhanitikkanen.blogspot.com/2012/02/caribbean-kigo-31.html