Friday, February 03, 2012

fou muin  -
wunter treen streek oot
fleggin the bairns




full moon  -
winter trees stretch out
frightening the children

6 comments:

  1. arthritic black fingers

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  2. Nice one, John. Just a suggestion but maybe 'frightening' may be better than 'frighten'...

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  3. Oh yes, I remember!

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  4. those pesky shadows / silhouettes. Love it!

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  5. elm branches
    the dragons stretch their necks
    full moon shadows

    __I just had to leave this instant's echo, John... to your fine haiku. Always. _m

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  6. This is a translation from your Caribbean Kigo entry; I think this one fits here, too?-)

    Ensi treffit -
    makaamme kuunnellen
    äidin askelia


    http://juhanitikkanen.blogspot.com/2012/02/caribbean-kigo-31.html

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