Tuesday, February 07, 2012

a laddie wins awa  -
back i the gairden
a trummlin brainch




a son emigrates  -
back in the garden
a trembling branch

7 comments:

  1. Very poignant haiku, John...

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  2. another well crafted

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  3. Life goes on.
    Beautifully written.

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  4. I see a young bird leaving its nest; the limb shakes. Very nice.
    _m

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  5. so vividly expressed

    much love...

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  6. The image of the branch conveys so much more that directly addressing the emotions might.

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  7. Full of humanity, with that touch of nature.

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