Thursday, September 22, 2011

a leaf faws  -
chitterin sweels
on the burn




a leaf falls  -
shivering circles
on the stream
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6 comments:

  1. Frank...3:07 AM

    Good work, John.'shivering circles' is a nice line...

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  2. Gillena Cox2:22 AM

    happy autumn


    much love...

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  3. jem4:29 AM

    Nice one John. Seems to straddle the season - suggestions of winter within an autumnal scene.

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  4. Gwil W12:31 PM

    deep

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  5. Bill5:56 PM

    Very good, and "shivering circles" is a treasure.

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  6. Magyar8:01 PM

    Falling into a "shivering circle," and sailing on the breeze. Fine one John. _m

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