Monday, September 05, 2011

hame, trailin slammachs  -
Wordsworth
trauchilt cluds




home, trailing spiders' webs  -
Wordsworth
trailed clouds

7 comments:

  1. aye, well said, we all leave our trails behind us . . .

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  2. got a few shimmering webs at home, the sunlight highlights their presence


    much love

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  3. __I love spider webs... imagination surges here, and yours, a good sight John!

    ... And the Rats followed the Piebald Piper on the trail to the river... . _m

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  4. We work with what we've got.

    Nice work.

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  5. Nice one, John. I too like spiders' webs...

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  6. Liked this on too:

    pulling ripe plums -
    the branch springs up
    in relief

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  7. I like it John. I'm partial to slipping other writers into my haiku too sometimes!

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