Tuesday, September 13, 2011

hairst mornin  -
weet dancin
on the dubs

autumn morning  -
rain dancing
on the puddles


  1. very nice haiku
    for me - music haiku

  2. You could write this haiku for each season this year, John!

    One of my favourite road signs in Fife is for Auchtertool and Puddledub; I'm just realising now that the second place is effectively Dubdub or Puddlepuddle!

  3. Believable observation, with the help of the imagination.

  4. It's been too long since I visited your blog. It's good to be back. And as ever you manage to make even the dreary seem welcoming - I'm glad the rain dances, even if we don't!

  5. Really lovely dad. I love seeing the rain drops dancing on the puddles too. I feel like i am on your daily walk with you :-)