Tuesday, June 28, 2011

sheddae o's dreepin stug  -
hern bydin
fir the cygnets




shadow of his dripping spike  -
heron waiting
for the cygnets

7 comments:

  1. anither braw image, John; going to Scottish Poetry Library tonight to hear Andrew Greig and others.

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  2. thanks gordon have a good time
    (incidentally haven't been posting to speug so much as creating a haibun page will let you know whenever its up)
    aye john

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  3. Heron-imus haiku!

    Looking forward to the haibun page :)

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  4. I love herons!

    My mac just read your poem, both ways. It sounded good.

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  5. __The Great Blues at our pond, seem intent on fish... but they'll not overlook any life support.

    "shadow of his dipping spike"

    Fine line and verse, John. _m

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  6. The ku as sharp as the beak.

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  7. certainly; i too picked up on the sharp beaks; aren't cygnets baby ducks, ouch !!!


    much love...

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