Wednesday, June 08, 2011

i the gairden
the bleckie dillin
the bodach's lanesomeness




in the garden
the blackbird soothing
the old man's loneliness
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5 comments:

  1. Devika Jyothi3:56 AM

    good one, John,

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Anonymous2:31 PM

    yes, a very good one.
    thank you

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  3. Bill4:22 PM

    Gentle and powerful.

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  4. Gwil W11:48 PM

    the tone of the blackbird appeals to the melancholy

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  5. Hiruta6:09 PM

    Nice haiku, thank you.

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