Wednesday, June 08, 2011

i the gairden
the bleckie dillin
the bodach's lanesomeness




in the garden
the blackbird soothing
the old man's loneliness

5 comments:

  1. good one, John,

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. yes, a very good one.
    thank you

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  3. Gentle and powerful.

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  4. the tone of the blackbird appeals to the melancholy

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  5. Nice haiku, thank you.

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