Tuesday, August 31, 2010

auld freen -
oxterin'm
oor banes bairge




old friend -
embracing him
our bones collide

9 comments:

  1. 'aged' cleverly resonated

    much love
    gillena

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  2. in the end
    it's only skin
    and bones

    john, so vivid!

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  3. i love the spirit of friedship here...good one, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. *friendship

    devika

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  5. ...of the age, another fine feeling here, John! _m

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  6. beautiful image of a long friendship

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  7. oh! what a piece... Some people are quick enough to criticize the use of 'old' but i love it. It goes well with the colliding bones, even in sound.

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  8. Ouch. Well done.

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