Saturday, August 28, 2010

his neb
tint in's baird -
een blae eggs in a nest




his face
lost in his beard -
eyes blue eggs in a nest

9 comments:

  1. of age contrasts; blue resonance;
    makes for an interesting scenario here


    much love
    gillena

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  2. Very nice set, John...

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  3. Love "blue eggs in a nest"! ;-)

    Alan
    The With Words International Online Haiku Competition 2010: weblink to competition page
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  4. his face
    rising to blue herons
    in flight

    good sets here John...like the friendly face over the fence :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  8. Well seen, John.

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