Monday, February 09, 2009

throuch the fite carse
the burn's bleck straik:
haiga




through the white landscape
the stream's black stroke:
haiga

9 comments:

  1. bellisimo! bravo!

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  2. A vivid imagery, John

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. ...'cross the vast white, this streak of ink. There is >color< in this. Grand. _m

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  4. A comment I tried to leave here inthe last few days got lost somehow. Anyway, you're doing good work, as always.

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  5. "the burn's bleck straik"

    yes!

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  6. a sumi-e painting with your words would make awonderful haiga

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  7. Nice one - it's true, the way snow shows up other colours more vividly. For that reason alone its good that we get a downfall every so often.

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