A vivid imagery, John wishes, devika
...'cross the vast white, this streak of ink. There is >color< in this. Grand. _m
I like it :)
A comment I tried to leave here inthe last few days got lost somehow. Anyway, you're doing good work, as always.
"the burn's bleck straik"yes!
a sumi-e painting with your words would make awonderful haiga
Nice one - it's true, the way snow shows up other colours more vividly. For that reason alone its good that we get a downfall every so often.