Tuesday, February 10, 2009

owernicht:
the perk fou
o forleetit snawmen




overnight:
the park full
of abandoned snowmen

9 comments:

  1. "Abandoned" -- by whom!?

    This is a sad one, John
    but they would soon be joking and laughing, i guess :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. John,

    I came to read a cheerful spring haiku...but reading this sad one, i forgot to say --

    hope to read some good ones in the coming days :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. remnants of a joyful day...
    love it

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  4. the theme of abandonment is nicely expressed, one cannot help though looking back to the livlier part of the day since the snowmen have not melted

    much love
    gillena

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  5. Good one. I like the way there are snowmen haiku popping up here and there - it means they live on after they melt.

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  6. An orphanage for abandoned snowmen?

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