Friday, February 20, 2009

a maw
weirin intil -
a hauf-mindit sang




a gull
slowly approaching -
a half-remembered song

11 comments:

  1. lovely. I can never remember all of a song unprompted, so this is very familiar. :-)

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  2. Sight sound and imagination, John... a fine one.

    Herring gulls, each one "corrects" the other's "words."
    _m

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  3. I like it - and just when you think it might crash into you, it veers off at the last moment!

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  4. ah, yes they do, they kind of ...kind of..don't they..and then they get going...just when you think they won't

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  5. Interesting, John

    i could read it many ways,
    haikus gaining depth, or me losing sense-- can't say! :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  6. ah yes... good one.

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  7. John, in full agreement with the comments above, Matt

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  8. Hi John,

    This is lovely.

    kami haiku

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  9. Hi John,

    No posting for over two days,
    Hope all is fine there..

    see you soon,

    wishes,
    devika

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