lovely. I can never remember all of a song unprompted, so this is very familiar. :-)
Sight sound and imagination, John... a fine one.Herring gulls, each one "corrects" the other's "words."_m
I like it - and just when you think it might crash into you, it veers off at the last moment!
ah, yes they do, they kind of ...kind of..don't they..and then they get going...just when you think they won't
Interesting, Johni could read it many ways, haikus gaining depth, or me losing sense-- can't say! :)wishes, devika
ah yes... good one.
John, in full agreement with the comments above, Matt
Hi John,This is lovely.kami haiku
Hi John, No posting for over two days, Hope all is fine there..see you soon, wishes, devika