Wednesday, January 14, 2009

wunter mornin -
twa auld freens
snaw in oor herr




winter morning -
two old friends
snow in our hair

9 comments:

  1. ... and the foggy voices.
    Nice one John
    _m

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  2. were they in ljubljana? ;)
    good one

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  3. A very friendly feel..

    Nice one, John

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. Very nice, John.

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  5. polona, they could be in Ljubljana but when I saw them they were in a betting shop in Stirling.

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  6. that heron haiku was really good!!!

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  7. Beautiful. I like the fact that the snow could be literal or a reference to the white hair of age.

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  8. It's great to see such effective haiku in Scots dialect. I especially liked the daffodil haiku in your tobaccoroad collection. My own background, that is my father's family, is Welsh.

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