Monday, January 19, 2009

furst snawfaw -
ilka brainch laidit
wi a ghaistly yin




first snowfall -
each branch laden
with a ghostly one
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6 comments:

  1. J. Andrew Lockhart8:47 PM

    very haunting :)

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  2. Devika Jyothi1:15 AM

    agree, a haunting image John

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. polona1:25 PM

    it does feel like that...
    great visual

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  4. magiceye10:37 PM

    brilliant!

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  5. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)8:48 AM

    Wow! That`s a good haiku!
    Line 3 is a real surprise.

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  6. jem4:11 AM

    Ohhh - very good, it's almost like double vision.

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