Monday, January 19, 2009

gangrel -
stame frae's bree
beekin's neb




tramp -
steam from his soup
warming his face
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5 comments:

  1. Gwil W7:40 AM

    strong visual image and
    winter moment captured

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  2. Masago6:51 PM

    Yes, very good.

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  3. Devika Jyothi1:13 AM

    Good one, John

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. polona1:23 PM

    powerful.

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  5. jem4:11 AM

    Warming to the reader too. Well noticed.

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