Monday, January 07, 2008

snell wund -
throuch the causeys
a joogler jooglin gullies




bitter wind -
through the streets
a juggler juggling knives

10 comments:

  1. thanks for the comment richard I hope you don't mind the change - this is nearer my meaning
    john

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  2. This ties together so well - the sense of sharpness in the first and last line, the two images meeting in the middle. Great stuff John!

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  3. a piercing image!

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  4. Jem found the right words.

    A good haiku!

    I hope that 2008 will be a wonderful year for you, John!

    best wishes,
    Angelika

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  5. I'll take the long way around, thank you.

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  6. I hope that bitter wind does not effect the juggling knives. :)

    Your haiku creates a great visual.

    S

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  7. Such sharpness in words and imagery. :) Wonderful.

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  8. Cuts right to the chase!

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