thanks for the comment richard I hope you don't mind the change - this is nearer my meaningjohn
This ties together so well - the sense of sharpness in the first and last line, the two images meeting in the middle. Great stuff John!
a piercing image!
Jem found the right words.A good haiku!I hope that 2008 will be a wonderful year for you, John!best wishes,Angelika
I'll take the long way around, thank you.
I hope that bitter wind does not effect the juggling knives. :)Your haiku creates a great visual.S
Such sharpness in words and imagery. :) Wonderful.
Cuts right to the chase!