thanks for the comment richard I hope you don't mind the change - this is nearer my meaningjohn
This ties together so well - the sense of sharpness in the first and last line, the two images meeting in the middle. Great stuff John!
a piercing image!
Jem found the right words.A good haiku!I hope that 2008 will be a wonderful year for you, John!best wishes,Angelika
I'll take the long way around, thank you.
yikes!! :)
I hope that bitter wind does not effect the juggling knives. :)Your haiku creates a great visual.S
Clear-cut...:)
Such sharpness in words and imagery. :) Wonderful.
Cuts right to the chase!
thanks for the comment richard I hope you don't mind the change - this is nearer my meaning
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This ties together so well - the sense of sharpness in the first and last line, the two images meeting in the middle. Great stuff John!
ReplyDeletea piercing image!
ReplyDeleteJem found the right words.
ReplyDeleteA good haiku!
I hope that 2008 will be a wonderful year for you, John!
best wishes,
Angelika
I'll take the long way around, thank you.
ReplyDeleteyikes!! :)
ReplyDeleteI hope that bitter wind does not effect the juggling knives. :)
ReplyDeleteYour haiku creates a great visual.
S
Clear-cut...:)
ReplyDeleteSuch sharpness in words and imagery. :) Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteCuts right to the chase!
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