Sunday, January 27, 2008

upwind a laddie
blawin bibbles -
a streetch intae a dramewarl




upwind a boy
blowing bubbles -
I walk into a dreamworld

4 comments:

  1. I like this - it shows the child still in your heart.

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  2. i like this haiku!
    a long line 3 but a dreamworld is so far away from every day life -- well done!

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