This one is brilliant!Did it really happen?
thanks andrew, yes it happened approx. three hours ago in the garden You can always be sure my haiku happened because I made a promise to myself years ago when I started that I would make my haiku a record of my life and only! write about things that have actually happened to me.
I like that- most of mine are that way. Some of the tanka, though, can take their own path.This one reminds me of one of mine from May 21.
I like it!