Tuesday, September 26, 2006

furst leaves fawin
a laddie stauns
pikein's neb




first leaves falling
a young boy stands
picking his nose

4 Comments:

Blogger Alan Summers said...

I love this haiku! It's innocent and so true to life, and not a bit precious. It's a great idea having bilingual haiku. I must link to my blog, if that's okay?

Alan
Area 17

9:32 AM

 
Blogger John McDonald said...

delighted alan tell me how to link to yours
john

10:51 AM

 
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

HA! i LOVE LINE 3! :)

5:59 PM

 
Blogger Alan Summers said...

Hi John!

I'm still learning various things myself! ;-)

I've sent you an email, and added you as a link.

Do you have any rugby haiku by the way?

Alan

12:06 PM

 

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