a bodie's cairpet
happin the claddach
pattren still vieve
somebody's carpet
covering the riverbed
design still vivid
posted by John McDonald at 8:04 AM
Tuesday, September 05, 2006
happin the claddach
pattren still vieve
somebody's carpet
covering the riverbed
design still vivid
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1 Comments:
Hi John thanks for visiting at Ashi' -
Your haiku' has a special feeling - I'm not sure, that what I get, is what you intended - I'm glad that you have the Scottish version as well - (funny that some of the words reminds and reflekt the Danish word)
1:41 PM
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