Gillena, i understand...but let me clarify with John's permission,
my "teeths" was an error because i meant to say plural and missed teeth was the plural of tooth :)
and then i left "teeth/chattering" because it conveyed more of the "present" effect of the action...at that point in time (not now)
But I agree, the chattering of teeth also works fine...but there's still a light shift about conveying the severity,
but basically my usage did not mean to say teeth's chattering...which means the "chattering of teeth"
anyway, thanks Gillena...infact my brain is a little slow in storing all the grammatical rules...so it helps (It is a wonder that I am a paid freelance/ghost writer! :)
I love line three!
ReplyDeleteWith a smile,
Angelika
line 3
ReplyDeletewell done
much love
gillena
first thaw
ReplyDeleteteeths
chattering
excuse me for that,
nice collection; really loved that "all the trees, one blossom" :)
wishes,
devika
i mean **teeth
ReplyDeletewishes,
devika
Bela imagem.
ReplyDeleteline 3 - a big surprise - kind of threatening somehow
ReplyDeleteFine vision, John. _m
ReplyDeleteand too Dev "teeth's chattering - the chattering of teeth :)
ReplyDeletecouldn't resist this one
much love
gillena
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ReplyDeleteGillena, i understand...but let me clarify with John's permission,
ReplyDeletemy "teeths" was an error because i meant to say plural and missed teeth was the plural of tooth :)
and then i left "teeth/chattering" because it conveyed more of the "present" effect of the action...at that point in time (not now)
But I agree, the chattering of teeth also works fine...but there's still a light shift about conveying the severity,
but basically my usage did not mean to say teeth's chattering...which means the "chattering of teeth"
anyway, thanks Gillena...infact my brain is a little slow in storing all the grammatical rules...so it helps (It is a wonder that I am a paid freelance/ghost writer! :)
Thanks John for the space,
wishes,
devika