Friday, December 17, 2010

on an eenin brainch
reid rab tentie o the sin
its reid breist




on an evening branch
a robin watches the sun
its red breast

6 comments:

  1. Good haiku, John,


    wishes,
    devika

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  2. bravo; nice one

    much love
    gillena

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  3. beautiful contrast!

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  4. yes, the robin does seem to be often around as twilight falls, but also I love to see the crows, the way they sit and watch the light breaking before the sunrise - as a group they're always first awake in the mornings - nature's early risers - and they even bring their own alarm clocks :)

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