Thursday, December 10, 2009

spate quallt -
i the glaur a deid tod
his bunt yin gentie straik




flood abated -
in the mud a dead fox
his tail one elegant stroke

6 comments:

  1. You have fox in your city??
    Long since i saw one!

    interesting haiku, elegance is a word I adore :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Nice one John. In our town we have quite a few urban foxes; they don't seem bothered by humans...

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  3. Dear John
    today ,I recieved an email from you with this subject "Request for urgent assistance please".have you sent this email or it's spam?

    best,
    sarah

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  4. Memorable image.

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  5. i like this one - very poetic Scots

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