Sunday, December 20, 2009

bath-watter gurlin
doon the jaw-hole -
the hoose less lanely




bath-water gurgling
down the plug-hole -
the house less lonely
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7 comments:

  1. Devika Jyothi6:46 PM

    That 'sounds' good! :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. magiceye2:58 AM

    superb!

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  3. Nancy Bea Miller4:20 PM

    Been there. Very poignant indeed!

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  4. Bill7:09 PM

    An astute observation.

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  5. Emma Dalloway3:37 AM

    love the Scots version of this!

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  6. Tikkis12:28 PM

    We warmed up our sauna just yesterday, from there a three-liner:

    warm steam
    from the sauna-stove --
    an excited bath whisk

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  7. mattm12:16 AM

    Good stuff John

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