Tuesday, October 06, 2009

dauncin i the err
haun in haun
...lowpin intae heiven




dancing in the air
hand in hand
...jumping into heaven

(for two young girls)
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3 comments:

  1. Dave Serjeant5:06 AM

    moving haiku for a deeply affecting story. RIP.

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  2. Hiruta6:49 AM

    not only for two young girls, but also for the old couple in the film last night...mcdonald san

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  3. Devika Jyothi8:28 PM

    I wonder whether they know what Heaven means!

    anyway...if its about the death of two girls...May their souls rest in peace....

    anyway, nice haiku..John

    wishes,
    devika

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