Friday, October 23, 2009

brennin leaves -
reek
thratchin




burning leaves -
smoke
writhing

9 comments:

  1. good one, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. good imagery, great scottish words...

    no!
    smoke without -
    fire!

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  3. reminds me of a song with a line about "smoke gets in your eyes"

    much love
    gillena

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  4. The Scots version is quite close to the German one:

    Brennende Blätter -
    Rauch
    sträubt sich

    Like the sound of the words and the picture itself a lot.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  6. ... and read the smell on the breeze. Lovit, John!

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  7. both english and scottish versions have a nice rhythm

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