good one, John :)wishes, devika
good imagery, great scottish words...no! smoke without -fire!
reminds me of a song with a line about "smoke gets in your eyes"much lovegillena
The Scots version is quite close to the German one:Brennende Blätter -Rauchsträubt sichLike the sound of the words and the picture itself a lot.Best wishesRalf
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... and read the smell on the breeze. Lovit, John!
both english and scottish versions have a nice rhythm