Wednesday, December 24, 2008

flu meesires -
throuch the chaumer winnock
craw's rispy caw




flu miseries -
through the bedroom window
crow's raspy call

9 comments:

  1. very innovative..:)

    Wish you and family a Merry Christmas, John

    devika

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  2. may I wish you and your family a joyous and peaceful Christmas Devika
    john

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  3. Thank you so much, John :)

    devika

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  4. ohh.. get well if you're the one suffering!
    excellent hainku, though.

    and may i return the best wishes for christmas and the new year!

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  5. Good luck getting any sympathy from a crow.

    All the joys of the season and all the luck you need in the year ahead.

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  6. I wonder
    how that caw
    is

    ;-) A merry and a flu-free Christmas!

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  7. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, John


    kami

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  8. Great one - although not good to experience obviously! Love the choice of 'miseries'!

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