oh, I read it and `saw` the cat`s red tongue!this "red" from line 2 made it!...well done!
interesting in more than one way, John :)wishes, devika
Nice, John.Interesting to personify the cat with boredom (my read - not necessarily your intent) in the face of a vibrant red blossom.
Yawning, indeed! Look how many of us were moved to respond. Well done!
the cat is old, the flower is in blossom, someone saw all this, -who is old?but also agree all comments
i can see him ;)
Great moment, John