Sunday, September 28, 2008

bag-wifie i the perk -
bairns' sheddaes
sweengin athort'r neb




bag-lady in the park -
childrens' shadows
swinging across her face

5 comments:

  1. john,
    i've been waiting for this one -
    brilliant!

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  2. Theres a lot to consider in this one - so much depth, so many stories. Well done.

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  3. I simply MUST make a translation here:

    Kassi-Alma puistossa --
    lasten varjot vilahtavat
    kasvojen yli


    (This name, Kassi-Alma is very special for me; kassi = a bag, but Alma is just one name, just one name...)

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